Sandy047
Jul 25, 2018
Writing Feedback / What I do in my free time - thinking about my goal [3]
Everyone has a dream,and be an excellent business consultant is my goal .
To become a good cosuant ,have abundant knowledge about business is needed . So in my free time(such as midnight before I get to sleep),I very likes to read business books to border my knowledge.This habit not only could borden my sight but also it always could makes me feel relaxed and have a good sleep.
Please give me some advice that how can I improve this essay,thank you very much!
excellent business consultant
Everyone has a dream,and be an excellent business consultant is my goal .
To become a good cosuant ,have abundant knowledge about business is needed . So in my free time(such as midnight before I get to sleep),I very likes to read business books to border my knowledge.This habit not only could borden my sight but also it always could makes me feel relaxed and have a good sleep.
Please give me some advice that how can I improve this essay,thank you very much!