ruthmargaretha21
Sep 27, 2018
Scholarship / Chevening Scholarship Leadership Response - the potential to be a leader [3]
Hey, as a fellow Chevening applicant, firstly I would like to say good luck to you.
In my humble opinion, although you have mentioned several examples of occasion in which you get to showcase your leadership skills with your position as an Accounts Clerk at the Commission, you have not shown a clear example of your leadership skills.
My advice would be, pick one out of the following as mentioned in your essay -> ... training in government accounting procedure, customer service, communication, work ethic, professionalism and time management.
After you have chosen one out of the above (or if you have any other example, it would be great, but decide on one) I think you will be able to focus more on how you showcase your leadership skill.
Also, I think it would be nice to do a re-check on your grammar. You can ask someone to proofread it for you.
Hey, as a fellow Chevening applicant, firstly I would like to say good luck to you.
In my humble opinion, although you have mentioned several examples of occasion in which you get to showcase your leadership skills with your position as an Accounts Clerk at the Commission, you have not shown a clear example of your leadership skills.
My advice would be, pick one out of the following as mentioned in your essay -> ... training in government accounting procedure, customer service, communication, work ethic, professionalism and time management.
After you have chosen one out of the above (or if you have any other example, it would be great, but decide on one) I think you will be able to focus more on how you showcase your leadership skill.
Also, I think it would be nice to do a re-check on your grammar. You can ask someone to proofread it for you.