Scholarship / A bioarchaeolgist seeking career change (Chevening 'Study in the UK' question) [3]

Hello,

i actually like your introductory paragraph, and regarding your second one, i think it would be more clear (as an outline) to start with your course choice and the first senctence where you're mentioning that both components are equally important can be embedded within the paragraph.

regarding your closing paragraph, i think it needs more elaboration on how are he chosen courses in line with your personal interests and if it's already mentioned in your first paragraph because it's partially reflected in you saying that your concerns have increased, then i think its a bit dummy repetition, you still have a couple of words left in your count so you could further clarify your closing part

Scholarship / Sustainable management to address business impacts (Chevening - Studying in the Uk essay) [5]

Hello,

i don't think you have mentioned the link between your academic/past experience and the courses you've chosen, maybe in the 2nd choice you did a bit where you said it complements your experience in envirotemntal management , while even tho this is not fully sufficient in the other two i believed lacked this relevance part.