Writing Feedback / GRE-Governments support financially the main cities because the major cities preserve culture [3]

hello .
i will give some comments for your text:
1. in the first sentence, you use "to bringing". i mean, that will be great if u change it be "to bring". Formula: to+v1
2. in second line, i found that point " an overstated". i am sure, you want to use noun so it could be "an overstating generation"
3. we can change this statement be "...rather than make them depends on central government"
4. it could be "If the governments only focus on ..."
5. that will be great " ... capacity poor for isolate local governments,"
6."Many may argue that ..." you have no subject for that statement, you can use such as people, persons, or citizens.
7. sorry, but i am not sure this is the correct word " subsidies" you can search other words for changing that word

sorry, i talk a lot. i hope those correction can help you