Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK2 - Discussion about the influences of robots [2]

Hello there ronia,

At first, paragraph, when you are talking about the danger of Robots in short, If I was you, I would mention when Robots are going to change employers this will cause "apocalypse". Look, Most of the people are gonna lose their job which will cause a massive riot of disappointed ex-employers. In general, I agree that Robots would change the world to good but from another side of it, They *WILL* cause big problems in society.

Thanks if you read this.

Kind regards, Anri.

Writing Feedback / Only good students should have the right to enter colleges [2]

... and people's life and as well ...

Try not to repeat yourself

In general, an essay is well made. I can't discuss with you just because I don't agree with your opinion because the essay is all about what you think.

But I am going to say that, Everyone has equal right in this life (At least we should have). Everyone is human and as we humans do sometimes we are not interested and motivated enough to study well. But there are the moments when you suddenly get the motivation out of nowhere and start studying well just because you want it, Not because someone forces you to do so. Sure it does not happen every time but everyone should have a chance to show their hidden skills.

For example, Einstein didn't study well at school. Let's say he was so bad at it, But look who he became.

Kind regards, Anri