Boom Shaka Laka
Nov 26, 2018
Graduate / How do you hope to develop, both personally and professionally, during this one-year program at MSBA [4]
Varun, the entire essay only ends up answering the first question of the essay prompt. The question 'How do you hope to develop, both personally and professionally, during this one-year program?' is scarcely touched on. This essay could be written in three paragraphs; the first answering the question 'Why is the Texas MSBA the next logical step for you?'. The second answering the question 'How do you hope to develop, both personally and professionally, during this one-year program?' and the last paragraph simply concluding and creating a synergy between the two paragraphs. You are also advised to trim down the details answering the first question on the prompt. To that effect, you could start your essay with your experience with Anthem Inc., since that experience is what led to the decision that the Texas MSBA is 'the next logical step for you'.
Varun, the entire essay only ends up answering the first question of the essay prompt. The question 'How do you hope to develop, both personally and professionally, during this one-year program?' is scarcely touched on. This essay could be written in three paragraphs; the first answering the question 'Why is the Texas MSBA the next logical step for you?'. The second answering the question 'How do you hope to develop, both personally and professionally, during this one-year program?' and the last paragraph simply concluding and creating a synergy between the two paragraphs. You are also advised to trim down the details answering the first question on the prompt. To that effect, you could start your essay with your experience with Anthem Inc., since that experience is what led to the decision that the Texas MSBA is 'the next logical step for you'.