Essays / 'my first Language is Arabic' - my essay ..about person I admire [4]

Hello everyone ...

Well,..that's my second essay i am writing this semester because i just get started weeks ago ...and i hate writing because i'm not good at it,but i have to keep trying and my first Language is Arabic so that why i found it hard ..most problem i have to get ideas especially during class period.. i have problems in punctuation.and vocabulary i used basic stuff i need strong and meaningful vocabulary...so i wish i could find help here and what i have to do to improve my writing ..Thanks