dungpharma97
Mar 25, 2019
Writing Feedback / ''Help me with my process: How bricks are produced'' [3]
Hello everyone! I'm a new member and I've just started writing task 1. It would be better if someone can help to check and contribute some ideas for my essay. Thanks so much :)
Overall, there are seven stages of producing bricks beginning with clay excarvation and ending with shipping bricks to the market.
Firstly, clay is dug with a digger. The pieces are filtered by using a metal grid and smaller pieces are picked up by the roller. The next step is mixing sand and water into clay. After shaping the bricks by using a mould or a wire cutter, they are dried by oven for 24 to 48 hours.
Those bricks are moved to a kiln which devided into 2 compartments. With the first one, they are kept at a moderate temperature ( 200C - 980C) and then they are burned at a higher temperature (870C - 1300C). Before being packaged, they are given to cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. The process concludes with delivery to the consumers.
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Hello everyone! I'm a new member and I've just started writing task 1. It would be better if someone can help to check and contribute some ideas for my essay. Thanks so much :)
The chart shows how to produce bricks and deliver them to the customers.
Overall, there are seven stages of producing bricks beginning with clay excarvation and ending with shipping bricks to the market.
Firstly, clay is dug with a digger. The pieces are filtered by using a metal grid and smaller pieces are picked up by the roller. The next step is mixing sand and water into clay. After shaping the bricks by using a mould or a wire cutter, they are dried by oven for 24 to 48 hours.
Those bricks are moved to a kiln which devided into 2 compartments. With the first one, they are kept at a moderate temperature ( 200C - 980C) and then they are burned at a higher temperature (870C - 1300C). Before being packaged, they are given to cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. The process concludes with delivery to the consumers.
Words 150
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