Scholarship / Scholarship Essay Question - gained knowledge, skills, and connections - present practical examples [5]

of course this is a not bad essay. But I found some of the point missing in this essay

1. in your first paragraph, what I see is that you need to deliver a detail explaining of your desire of contributing.
2. in your second paragraph, explain them how would you motivate them : your idea and your process

I found this two as a main pt to change.

Scholarship / Water Resource Engineering - motivation letter for Sweden scholarship [3]

Hi, yinebeb, your mortivation is short and I think it should be around 400. The problems you mentioned is just the overview, you need to deep down into the issue and say the specific people who are suffering from it. In my motivation letter, I am used to adding how to expand my professional network when I arrive at my study-destination and how I would use that network. Hope this message help you.