Writing Feedback / assignment - do you agree with the idea that children have a pet [2]

[b]I agree that children should have a pet. The first reason is that they will be responsibe when they have a pet beside . Because kids have to feed, bathe and bring them walking out. Therefore, children learn important skills to taking care of another living creture. Another reason is that kids do exercise more. Having a pet help children to get outdoor and cuddle a pet reduces stress, loneliness, anxiety. Moreover, playing with dogs may help them lower blood pressure. The last reason is that pets will be their friend or their sibling. Kids are the only one no have sibling, a pet helps them feel less lonely, bring joy and fullfillment. Children also learn how to " share" their parent's time and their own space. Kids are more respectful, more kind, and have a big love for the animal.

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