Carolinewhite
Jun 6, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS task 2: Essay about fast food is becoming increasingly popular in most countries. [5]
you're essay is quite good. 1) having a clear progression, 2) having a range of cohesive devices, 3) a range of vocabulary. Just one thing, as I remember my teacher said do not use to conclude in the concluding paraphrase, I suggest you to double check if it's ok to use.^^
you're essay is quite good. 1) having a clear progression, 2) having a range of cohesive devices, 3) a range of vocabulary. Just one thing, as I remember my teacher said do not use to conclude in the concluding paraphrase, I suggest you to double check if it's ok to use.^^