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Posts by umiunme
Joined: Oct 6, 2009
Last Post: Oct 8, 2009
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Oct 7, 2009
Student Talk / Exam passing tips - its my final year [71]

How you perform in your exam also depends on the atmosphere around you.
firstly go to the examination hall atleast 20 min earlier and don't concentrate much on your surroundings.
Close your eyes and meditate if possible ...
When the question paper is given to you , start concentrating completely on the paper and one question at a time and if you come across any question which you don't know , attempt it at the last.ALL THE BEST!!!
umiunme   
Oct 8, 2009
Essays / Reality shows:How real the reality shows are??-Thesis statement [11]

I've written thesis...please comment on it and correct my grammar mistakes as well....

These days every TV channel has reality shows, everyone seems to be really crazy about them and even the sponsors are ready to pour in money. Contestants of the show are made to perform dangerous stunts and do all sorts of absurd things in order to commercialize the show. Celebrities are frequently invited on the show to increase the TRP ratings of the show.

But the bitter truth is that there is very little reality in the reality shows. In fact, 75% of the show is manipulated and edited. The show has a framed script already,Directors,Producers and Technicians guiding the contestant in a planned manner. Judges are hired,they often pretend to get emotional and angry and leave the show abruptly but they appear in the next episode. All the decisions and results are biased and pre-determined. Shockingly,even tthe audiences of the shows are fake.

In this paper, I will explore the extent of reality in reality shows and examine what they say about us a society.

thats it...plz comment...
what my sir said is to focus on one particular reality show...and do research on it....
what should i do??
if you can come up with better thesis and argument...you are welcome...plzz help me out...friends..
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