Undergraduate / Engineering as a major - China student enrolling in USA [3]

Greetings! ,
My name is den. I'm from China and an undergraduate student who wishes to enrol universities in USA. The deadline for the application is on the 15th of January. And I would like to ask for support for my application. So, if people available on this period, please make an urgent analysis of my response.

Describe your academic objectives and indicate how these are appropriate to your long-range goals.

Please include specifically how a Bachelor's degree from the University of Toronto will contribute to your achieving your longer-range goals.

Engineering is a very impressive major, which would constantly develop to create infinite invention which would change people lives. As persistent electrical engineering, my passion for trying out new challenges and creative thinking mind would help me to pursue my long-term goals of becoming the best engineer. The educational program of math, physics and advanced engineer class would support me to achieve much success and to become a savant. After finishing my degree at the university, I would make an enormous contribution to the university and my own country.