MartaJones
Jan 15, 2020
Writing Feedback / Opinion Essay. City or country? [2]
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Nowadays, most people in the world live in cities. The minority of the population that want to live surronded of threes choosethe country. But what is it better, living in the county or in the city? In my opinion I prefer living in the city
Firstly living in the city is more confortable for daily lige because every place where you buy clothes or food is near so it does not take you a lot of time. Then, in the city there are better jobs to access and live a better live.
Secondly, in the city there are more entretaintment facilities like theaters, cinemas, nightclubs, museums, libraries,... that cab make you a happier life. There are also better schools and universities where students can have a good studies to acces a better job.
In conclution, there are lots of advantages to live in the city, so I think that people who wants a crazy, funny and a interes life should live there.
Hello 👋🏻, can someboday help me and revise my essay and tell me what should I change?? I will be very glad, Thank you!!
where to live?
Nowadays, most people in the world live in cities. The minority of the population that want to live surronded of threes choosethe country. But what is it better, living in the county or in the city? In my opinion I prefer living in the city
Firstly living in the city is more confortable for daily lige because every place where you buy clothes or food is near so it does not take you a lot of time. Then, in the city there are better jobs to access and live a better live.
Secondly, in the city there are more entretaintment facilities like theaters, cinemas, nightclubs, museums, libraries,... that cab make you a happier life. There are also better schools and universities where students can have a good studies to acces a better job.
In conclution, there are lots of advantages to live in the city, so I think that people who wants a crazy, funny and a interes life should live there.
