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Name: Joshua Deonarine
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Last Post: Jan 23, 2020
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guyucguy   
Jan 21, 2020
Undergraduate / Tell us about a time when you learned from failure - UofT One Idea Application [4]

I should prepare better



In my third year of high school around Christmas time, the school was planning on holding its annual festive assembly. Three people including me, who were on the tech crew for the school, were responsible for setting up the event. I was specifically in charge of consulting with each group that was performing and gathering the songs, as well as finding out what lighting cues they needed. I decided that it would be easiest to meet with each group that signed up and talk to them in person about what they needed. During a meet with everyone, I stated that each group should schedule a meeting with me so I can gather what I need from them and we can set a day to practice. What I failed to do was give clear steps and instructions about how to contact me. This lead to only a couple of meetings and not being able to practice with any of the groups. When the day of the assembly arrived, there had been very little preparation and the assembly was disorganized. Looking back, I realized that I should have had a better system to set up a meeting as well as being more clear and concise when explaining. I took this experience and used it to become much better at being clear and concise when planning, as well as being able to give better instructions. For example, in my final year, I was in charge of meeting with each group for the assembly again, but this time I created a spreadsheet online and emailed it out to each group detailing times for meeting and practice. This made it a lot easier for each group to schedule a meeting, along with making the assembly go off smoothly.
guyucguy   
Jan 22, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS task 1 - comparing three types of food prices [8]

Overall, you were able to clearly explain what is happening to the foods shown on the graph, but what about the consumer-price index. Some questions I have are what currency are you using to describe the prices of the foods, as well as why did the fresh fruits and vegetables grow so much more than the rest?

"the price of all the treethree foods changed"
"and then it is followed by a constant rise"
guyucguy   
Jan 23, 2020
Writing Feedback / Some people believe mental strength is more important for success in sports while others think... [5]

There are quite a few grammatical errors, but overall I feel that you were able to clearly show each side and how it affects the players. Maybe perhaps be a little more clear on which side your personal view takes, whether it be fitness and power, psychological condition, or neutral. I do recommend quickly using a free grammar check online.
guyucguy   
Jan 23, 2020
Undergraduate / Tell us about a time when you learned from failure - UofT One Idea Application [4]

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Tell us about a time when you learned from failure - UofT One Idea Application



During my fourth year of high school, in my tech design course, throughout the first half of the course, I would find myself falling behind due to procrastinating. The quality of my projects was going down, and so was my mark. I decided to talk with the teacher about how to start improving again and realised that my procrastination was a symptom of doing well during the start of the course, and then thinking that I could put things off since I thought I knew I was going to do good. Upon discovering this, I decided to start practising more at home and start asking questions when confused in class, as well as asking my peers to review my work before handing it in. I used this experience to become better at managing my time by finding different strategies as to how I can easily manage it, along with not being afraid to ask for help and knowing when to ask for help. For example, when the final project came around, we were tasked with creating a condo to be put on a lot. I was able to break up the project into steps and create a timeframe for each step. This made it easy to manage my time and know when I was behind and needed help from either my teacher or my peers. In the end, my mark improved not only in the tech design course but also in some other courses due to me being able to better manage my time.
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