ash1699
Feb 10, 2020
Undergraduate / 'amazing, a wonderful friend and an even better person' - Other people's opinions of me [2]
How would your family, friends, and/or members of your community describe you?
If possible, please include something about yourself that you are most proud of and why. (maximum 250 words).
Seated in the grass with my brother and watching a game seven years ago, I recalled admiring my parents taking their responsibilities. I was cognisant that I would have to step up. Glimpse of future independence prevailed; however, reticence impeded my communication skills. I fear failures thus I avoided growing. My supportive parents continued pushing me beyond all self-imposed boundaries.
My best friend once said, "You're amazing, a wonderful friend and an even better person. You've got a weird humour, but you are the smartest person I know and one of the kindest too." Most of my friends say this. Initially, I am extraordinarily shy. However, with time, I become comfortable, more expressive and fun. My friends appreciate me for my cutthroat honesty and solemnly respect me.
I am determined and work assiduously to achieve my goals. I am supportive and supported and am trusting, trustworthy and mellow. I observe the world, accept it and contemplate on how to react. I am known to rationalise situations when needed or not. I am also loyal, patient, compassionate and reliable. My community respects me and is pleased with my rare achievements.
I was proud of my achievements and being valedictorian in high school by accomplishing subjects that were not in my regular classes. Then with less self-doubt, I attained a distinction in university. Throughout my academic life, I have been scared to be pushed, but I ended up excelling past my self-made box.
Please give me some feedback. Any errors? Anything I should not talk about? Thanks.
Tell us about who you are.
How would your family, friends, and/or members of your community describe you?
If possible, please include something about yourself that you are most proud of and why. (maximum 250 words).
Seated in the grass with my brother and watching a game seven years ago, I recalled admiring my parents taking their responsibilities. I was cognisant that I would have to step up. Glimpse of future independence prevailed; however, reticence impeded my communication skills. I fear failures thus I avoided growing. My supportive parents continued pushing me beyond all self-imposed boundaries.
My best friend once said, "You're amazing, a wonderful friend and an even better person. You've got a weird humour, but you are the smartest person I know and one of the kindest too." Most of my friends say this. Initially, I am extraordinarily shy. However, with time, I become comfortable, more expressive and fun. My friends appreciate me for my cutthroat honesty and solemnly respect me.
I am determined and work assiduously to achieve my goals. I am supportive and supported and am trusting, trustworthy and mellow. I observe the world, accept it and contemplate on how to react. I am known to rationalise situations when needed or not. I am also loyal, patient, compassionate and reliable. My community respects me and is pleased with my rare achievements.
I was proud of my achievements and being valedictorian in high school by accomplishing subjects that were not in my regular classes. Then with less self-doubt, I attained a distinction in university. Throughout my academic life, I have been scared to be pushed, but I ended up excelling past my self-made box.
Please give me some feedback. Any errors? Anything I should not talk about? Thanks.