Essays / UCD smurfit essay question - explaining why I wish to undertake this programme, future career [4]

In one of the paragraphs I have written as follows, is it a good way to combine?
In a brief study, I found that Trinity has modules like Entrepreneurship, Ethical business in its curriculum, which I didn't find in any B-school of my country. I find the courses in Trinity are so well designed with all the required modules packaged into one. The opportunity to work on a project with the industry experts in Trinity Term excites me. My immediate goal is to improve my analytical, interpersonal communication skills and with my key interest in subjects of Brand Management and Digital Marketing, I look forward to taking up challenging roles. The choice of MSc Marketing, and Digital Marketing Strategy both aligns well with my immediate and long-term goal of Entrepreneurship. I believe the skills, values, and knowledge that I will learn from this legacy, will help me to enhance managerial skills and develop me to become a successful entrepreneur. I look forward to being a part of this esteemed institute.@ Holt?