Writing Feedback / IELTS PIE CHART: The graphs compare the different types of energy manufacture of France [2]

Comparison of energy production

The graphs compare the different types of energy manufacture of France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall, Using Coal, gas, and petro to produce energy account for the largest proportion of productions in both years. On the other hand, Nuclear energy production accounts for the least.

The percentage of Coal energy production in 1995 and 2005 are 29.80% and 30.93% respectively. Likewise, the proportion of Gas energy production in 1995 increased from 29.63% to 30.31% in 2005. However, in the same period, The ratio of Petro energy production in 1995 decreased from 29.27% to just 19.55%.

The percentage of Nuclear and other energy production both increased, Nuclear energy production increased from 6.4% in 1995 to 10.10% in 2005, other energy production increased from 4.9% to 9.1%.
There is a clear trend that Energy production shifts from the conventional way of create energy to some modern way of doing it.

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Writing Feedback / IELTS PIE CHART: The charts illustrate the annual income and expense of a US charity organization. [4]

Revenue sources and expenditures of a USA charity

The charts illustrate the annual income and expense of a US charity organization in 2016.
Overall, the entity spent less money than they accumulated. The primary source of revenue was donated food and program service, and the majority of expenditures came from program service.

In regard to the revenue sources, donated food and community contributions accounted for exactly 97% of the money this entity accumulated ( donated food comprised of 86.6% and community contributions represented 10.4%). The remaining sources of revenue was program revenue (2.2%), investment income (0.2%), government grant (0.2%) and other income (0.4%). And the total revenue for the year was 53,561,580$.

In terms of expenditures, program service took the most significant part of total expenses the entity spent in 2016, which comprised of 95.8%. Beside that, the organization paid for fundraising activities (2.6%) and management and general (1.6%). And the total expenditure for the year was 53,224,896$

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