Posts by lukeish
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a paragraph on my favorite dessert [8]
Describe your favourite dessert vividly - think of
why you love red velvet cake so much, what sensations come to mind when eating it. Does it remind you of a particular memory? Is it visually appealing?
Essays /
Thesis that unifies three points - Spanish essay [2]
Hi there -
I am writing a mid-term in my Spanish culture class in the form of an essay. The three points that must be included (and that I have developed into paragraphs) are:
- the three rounds of bullfighting
- the ties to Stoicism, a prevalent philosophy throughout the history of Spain
- the moral vs. traditional debate. (i.e., whether it is ethically wrong to treat animals in such a way or if it has validity in preserving a culture)
I need a thesis that unifies these three points! So far I'm using (this is very weak):
Bullfighting is an important part of Spanish culture.
Any other suggestions?
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