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Aug 2, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 1 - The graph shows predictions about the number of people who will study 3 languages [2]
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The graph below shows predictions about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates anticipations about the number of students who will study three major languages in the world, over a decade between 2020 and 2030. The figures are given in millions.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there will be steady upward trends in the number of students who study English, Spanish, and Mandarin. Another interesting point is that Mandarin will have been the second most popular language for students by 2028 instead of Spanish.
In detail, as regards English, the number of students is likely to reach 550 million in 2020, then rising sharply to 700 million in 2024. Despite being estimated to experience a slight drop to 630 million in 2026, the figure will go up steadily to 750 million in 2030, being the peak level during the whole period.
If we look at the number of students of Spanish, it is set to hit about 200 million in 2020. After that, there will be a remarkable rise to 500 million at the end of the period. The trend is predicted to be similar to Mandarin. The figure will reach around 100 million in 2020, which was the lowest number of three languages. Next, the number of students studying Mandarin will shoot up year-on-year, finishing at just under 600 million by 2030.
Summarize the information from the graph
Hi, I'm a beginner. Please give me some feedback. Thank you very much!!!
The graph below shows predictions about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates anticipations about the number of students who will study three major languages in the world, over a decade between 2020 and 2030. The figures are given in millions.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there will be steady upward trends in the number of students who study English, Spanish, and Mandarin. Another interesting point is that Mandarin will have been the second most popular language for students by 2028 instead of Spanish.
In detail, as regards English, the number of students is likely to reach 550 million in 2020, then rising sharply to 700 million in 2024. Despite being estimated to experience a slight drop to 630 million in 2026, the figure will go up steadily to 750 million in 2030, being the peak level during the whole period.
If we look at the number of students of Spanish, it is set to hit about 200 million in 2020. After that, there will be a remarkable rise to 500 million at the end of the period. The trend is predicted to be similar to Mandarin. The figure will reach around 100 million in 2020, which was the lowest number of three languages. Next, the number of students studying Mandarin will shoot up year-on-year, finishing at just under 600 million by 2030.
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