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Sep 28, 2020
Writing Feedback / Task 2 ielts - Many countries nowaday have population with more young people than old people [6]
At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
it is understandable that many countries nowaday have population with more young people than old people. Even this fact has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinions the advatantages outweigh the disadvantages, Despite many drawbacks, young people still play an important role in the growing economy of the countries
On the one hand, the population with the young adults overwhelm the old people can lead to many problems such as lacking of skills in adapting and using modern technology nowaday. For example of the country in Asia which has protential economy is Viet Nam. Owning the population with the young people overwhelm the old people but Viet Nam dont have many important leader and young worker are still unexperienced in applying new technology. So that Viet Nam has to hire foreigner experts of many countries to guild and help them in improving, applying technology or upgrading infrastructure.
On the other hand, young population can bring huge workforce in to industries, economy,..,which become the first priority of many countries in development. Young population such as teenagers, adults are energetic, creative and they can adapt the modern technology quickly so they become indispensable role in develop countries, improve living standard and infrastructure of the country. For example like Japan which has old population. However, Japan still become top 5 largest economies in the world. Because they aren't only using the young people of the countries, they also recruit and make priorities for young people who from many different countries.
In the conclusion, it is inevitable to say that young people play an important role in the developmen of the countries. Althrough many drawbacks, they are still the main workforce of the countries and with thier indication can make the coutry better in the near future. That is all the reason why the advantages of more young people in he country overwhelm the disadvantages of it
writing task 2 young population
At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
it is understandable that many countries nowaday have population with more young people than old people. Even this fact has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinions the advatantages outweigh the disadvantages, Despite many drawbacks, young people still play an important role in the growing economy of the countries
On the one hand, the population with the young adults overwhelm the old people can lead to many problems such as lacking of skills in adapting and using modern technology nowaday. For example of the country in Asia which has protential economy is Viet Nam. Owning the population with the young people overwhelm the old people but Viet Nam dont have many important leader and young worker are still unexperienced in applying new technology. So that Viet Nam has to hire foreigner experts of many countries to guild and help them in improving, applying technology or upgrading infrastructure.
On the other hand, young population can bring huge workforce in to industries, economy,..,which become the first priority of many countries in development. Young population such as teenagers, adults are energetic, creative and they can adapt the modern technology quickly so they become indispensable role in develop countries, improve living standard and infrastructure of the country. For example like Japan which has old population. However, Japan still become top 5 largest economies in the world. Because they aren't only using the young people of the countries, they also recruit and make priorities for young people who from many different countries.
In the conclusion, it is inevitable to say that young people play an important role in the developmen of the countries. Althrough many drawbacks, they are still the main workforce of the countries and with thier indication can make the coutry better in the near future. That is all the reason why the advantages of more young people in he country overwhelm the disadvantages of it