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Name: Saatvik Kurup
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saatvik7   
Oct 3, 2020
Undergraduate / Tell us about who you are; I have the will and patience it takes to make a strong individual. [4]

Tell us about who you are.


How would your family, friends, and/or members of your community describe you?


My parents say that I don't give up and I have the will and patience it takes to make a strong individual. Someone who is mature than the age might suggest, who can sit down in a family discussion and give constructive solutions to everyday family problems. They would also say that I am a third parent to my brother who picks him up from daycare everyday, helps him study and teaches him new concepts.

To my friends, I am a willing helper. Always there for them whenever they need me, helping them with homework, supporting them through tough times. They would also describe me as an approachable leader as I often plan for our player basketball and football practices, and make study group plans while keeping everyone's need and schedules in mind. often encouraging them to come practice or study.

Hi, this is what I have so far, please send some constructive critique below.

thank you
saatvik7   
Oct 4, 2020
Undergraduate / Tell us about who you are; I have the will and patience it takes to make a strong individual. [4]

@fatmajanna
My parents say that I do not give up and I have the will and patience it takes to make a strong individual. Someone who is more mature than the age might suggest, who can sit down in a family discussion and give constructive solutions to everyday family problems. They would also say that I am a third parent to my brother who picks him up from daycare everyday, helps him study and teaches him new concepts.

For my friends, they would say I am always there for them whenever they need me, helping them with homework; staying after school to help them understand new concepts. They would also describe me as a hard worker because they tell me that I am always studying or practicing football, basketball or going out to run.

The one community member that knows me really well is Herv, a coordinator at the Langley boys and girls club. To him I am a disciplined leader because I volunteer at the club, carrying out tasks with the kids and fellow leaders, always promoting a fun environment. He would also say that I am always on time or I let him know beforehand that I will be late. He also says I take initiatives to be a part of the community. An example of that would be the time I emailed him asking to run a small camp during the summer for the kids since they were not able to do any activities during the quarantine.

this is my updated essay. unfortunately i was not able to include the part about what i feel the most proud of because the word limit is 250 words and I am already at 249
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