kevinzultaf
Jan 21, 2021
Writing Feedback / (coffee and tea purchases) - WRITING TASK 1 - TEST 1 (CAM 15) [3]
From an overall perspective INITIALLY (Its better than buy words), ... largest percentageS in total ...
Brisbane and AdelaideisARE less ...
... at cafés.HENCE/THUS, ... people inSydney the former area (avoiding repetition) are ... which is BEING about ...
..., FROM 50% to 53% of ...which is SHOWING around 15% ...
... constitutes BECAME the highest ...
Notes:
- reduce for using too much the words of "which is", its better if you use another option.
- Overall, you have wide range of grammars and vocabularies
Brisbane and Adelaide
... at cafés.HENCE/THUS, ... people in
..., FROM 50% to 53% of ...
... constitutes BECAME the highest ...
Notes:
- reduce for using too much the words of "which is", its better if you use another option.
- Overall, you have wide range of grammars and vocabularies