Scholarship / Personal Statement, Erasmus Scholarship: GLOCAL Master program, study track Sustainable Business [4]

This essay has good structure and flow. My suggestion is you have proof-read and grammar check for your essay to make sure there's no error :) Good luck for your scholarship!

Letters / IT studies - Stipendium Hungaricum - Motivation Letter for BSc in Electrical Engineering [5]

Hi Duong,

I think you need to shorten the letter and cut off some words. You may merge the third and fourth paragraph because they have the same point, explaining the XX faculty at a certain university.

Good luck!