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raybaz   
Oct 23, 2009
Undergraduate / 'Because we can' - Activity Short Answer [8]

150 Word Elaboration on one of my activities... let me know what you think

This summer I decided to look into the oft-discussed online community radio station, iTNTRadio.com. I was amazed at what I saw: the team had managed to consolidate an array of outlets for teen expression, including shows and blogs containing media reviews. As I saw the tagline "JOIN THE SUMMER TAKEOVER," I knew I had found my summer project. I met the interns, the most eclectic and purely dedicated group. Work officially ended at 4:30, yet there we were 'til 6 bouncing ideas. I was able to experience working at a fully operating media company. My responsibilities grew to include maintaining the daily blog, organizing an archive of past shows, and designing and developing a new sports site. I truly realized the power of the freely expressed voice of a community. The sky was the limit, with ideas often becoming reality. Thus our motto: BECAUSE WE CAN!

Some people have told me to make it more formal, i.e. replacing "bouncing ideas" with "brainstorming."
Glad to hear your opinion
raybaz   
Jun 21, 2010
Undergraduate / 'Because we can' - Activity Short Answer [8]

I forgot to follow up, but thanks for the advice! The final version ended up being more or less along the lines of your suggestions, and I got into my first choice college!!
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