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Jul 13, 2021
Writing Feedback / IELTS 1 - using energy in an average household and the greenhouse gas emmision numbers [2]
The first chart describes how Australians use energy in an average household while the second chart illustrates the greenhouse gas wastes which using this energy lead to.
Overall, the trend of using energy to heat is the most popular in this Australian household. It is clear that, the water heating discharges the most gas emissions.
The amount of energy which is used for heating is the highest figure, at 42%. While the energy for water heating ranks the second, with 12% lower than that of heating. By contrary, people use only 2% energy in order to cool.
It is noticable that, the majority of gas emissions results from water heating which account for 32%. At the same time, cooling discharges 3% gar emission
IELTS writting task 1 - charts data
The first chart describes how Australians use energy in an average household while the second chart illustrates the greenhouse gas wastes which using this energy lead to.
Overall, the trend of using energy to heat is the most popular in this Australian household. It is clear that, the water heating discharges the most gas emissions.
The amount of energy which is used for heating is the highest figure, at 42%. While the energy for water heating ranks the second, with 12% lower than that of heating. By contrary, people use only 2% energy in order to cool.
It is noticable that, the majority of gas emissions results from water heating which account for 32%. At the same time, cooling discharges 3% gar emission
