Writing Feedback / [IELTS TASK 1] MAP ABOUT A UNIVERSITY'S SPORTS CENTRE [7]

It's essential for you to divide the introduction and the overall paragraph into 2 single paragraphs.

Writing Feedback / Ielts writing task 1- Summarize the information about the process by which bricks are manufactured. [4]

You should try to extend your essay so that it will reach the minimum amount of words, which is very essential in IELTS from my experience.