mimi911
Oct 30, 2009
Undergraduate / "flight 931!" - UF ESSAY draft can someone revise it [3]
In the space provided, please write a concise narrative in which you describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or your contribution to the UF campus community. You may want to reflect on your ideas about student responsibility, academic integrity, campus citizenship or a call to service.
"Last call for flight 931!" I was hoping someone would pinch me, and wake me up from this dreadful nightmare. I had no alternative but to get on that plane and go to Nicaragua. I went to school over there for two years, and so far it has been the most drastic change I had to get accustomed to. My education, language, and uniform had been altered; I felt I was an extraterrestrial lost in Earth. My mother always told me: "If life hands you lemons make lemonade," so I had to deal with it. This happened four years ago, and now that I look back at it, I am so thankful for this experience.
Living in Central America gave me the privilege to observe the hardships of others. It is not easy out there, there are children that cannot receive an education because they have to work in order to supplement their family's income. There are families that live in houses of cardboard and had nothing to eat. Approximately three kids would approach me every week asking for money. We complain about our economic situation but it is nothing compared to the poverty in Nicaragua.
When I came back to Miami I realized how fortunate I was. I had a roof to protect me, I was going to school, and I finally had my mother by my side. Somehow I wouldn't appreciate this before and all of a sudden it seemed so significant. As soon as I began school I got right on track. An essential element to be successful is to be responsible. Truth to be told I was used to leaving assignments for the last minute, but I learned that procrastination will get you no where.
* i want to start talking about my ideas of student responsibility, academic integrity and campus citizenship but how do i do it?
In the space provided, please write a concise narrative in which you describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or your contribution to the UF campus community. You may want to reflect on your ideas about student responsibility, academic integrity, campus citizenship or a call to service.
"Last call for flight 931!" I was hoping someone would pinch me, and wake me up from this dreadful nightmare. I had no alternative but to get on that plane and go to Nicaragua. I went to school over there for two years, and so far it has been the most drastic change I had to get accustomed to. My education, language, and uniform had been altered; I felt I was an extraterrestrial lost in Earth. My mother always told me: "If life hands you lemons make lemonade," so I had to deal with it. This happened four years ago, and now that I look back at it, I am so thankful for this experience.
Living in Central America gave me the privilege to observe the hardships of others. It is not easy out there, there are children that cannot receive an education because they have to work in order to supplement their family's income. There are families that live in houses of cardboard and had nothing to eat. Approximately three kids would approach me every week asking for money. We complain about our economic situation but it is nothing compared to the poverty in Nicaragua.
When I came back to Miami I realized how fortunate I was. I had a roof to protect me, I was going to school, and I finally had my mother by my side. Somehow I wouldn't appreciate this before and all of a sudden it seemed so significant. As soon as I began school I got right on track. An essential element to be successful is to be responsible. Truth to be told I was used to leaving assignments for the last minute, but I learned that procrastination will get you no where.
* i want to start talking about my ideas of student responsibility, academic integrity and campus citizenship but how do i do it?