ratinahat
Dec 31, 2021
Writing Feedback / New company goods - Ielts writing for task2 [7]
The points could be justified further. For example, in third paragraph, what happens when people buy things that they don't need? why is it bad? Also, take note of the word count, it should be 250.
The points could be justified further. For example, in third paragraph, what happens when people buy things that they don't need? why is it bad? Also, take note of the word count, it should be 250.
