Undergraduate / STIPENDIUM HUNGARICUM ESSAY - BA OF ECONOMICS [6]

@cavanigma

I think you should alter your first paraghraph into something simple like: I am writing this letter to apply for Economic studies in Hungarian University.

also in the fourth paragraph is unnecessary to write in the motivstion esay.

Scholarship / Study Plan to improve Foreign Languages (Korea and English degree course) before and after you come [5]

@Renu1973
I think the outline that you want to deliver is good enough. However, I suggest you to wrote it in the coherent paragraph to make it more formal.