Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 2:businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way [3]

Let me correct some of your mistakes in your essay. You made a lot of mistakes !
emphasis => emphasize (1st paragraph , line 1)
customer => customers (1st paragraph, line 3)
While, : delete the comma (1st paragraph, line 2)
latest => the latest : remember to add the article "the" before superlative (2nd paragraph, line 1)

Writing Feedback / Females participating in parliament - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 [4]

You made some mistakes in your essay. Let me help correct them :
2nd paragraph, line 2 : remained => remaining
3rd paragraph , line 2: timescale => add an article in front : the timescale
4th paragraph, line 2: period=> the period . (You made mistakes referring to articles a lot!)
4th paragraph, line 3: growed => grew (be careful with irregular verbs !)
4th paragraph, line 4: UK => the UK