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Aug 26, 2023
Writing Feedback / Many people across the globe are consuming an exorbitant amount of sugar-based beverages [2]

More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this?



It is an undeniable fact that an alarmingly high number of individuals across the globe are consuming an exorbitant amount of sugar-based beverages. This issue is deeply rooted in various factors and therefore requires immediate action.

One of the primary reasons behind the widespread consumption of sugar beverages like soft drinks, sports drinks or tea is the manipulative content in their advertisements. Companies such as Coca-Cola and Pepsi are guilty of using these commercials to influence people, especially children, into believing that drinking their products will make them popular, resulting in a surge of people consuming these drinks.

Additionally, the presence of chemicals like caffeine and sugar in these beverages provides consumers with a refreshing and energizing boost, leading them to indulge in them repeatedly to satisfy their cravings. This, in turn, can result in addiction, obesity, diabetes, and circulatory disorders. For example, in the United States, there is a survey that is collecting information about the percentage of people who have diseases caused by sugar drinks and the results from the survey show that there a numerous people who consume sugar beverages are obese, have type 2 diabetes and having circulatory disease.

Thankfully, there are several measures that can be implemented to tackle this critical issue. One such solution is for the government to increase taxes on sugar beverages, making them more expensive and discouraging consumers from buying them. Another effective approach to this problem is health organizations and governments must work together on advertising campaigns that highlight the detrimental effects of consuming too many sugar-based drinks and provide viable solutions to this problem. As a result, this will affect these consumers who are addicted to sugar drinks to stop consuming or to lower their intake.

In conclusion, while there are multiple reasons behind the over-consumption of sugar-based beverages, it is crucial to take immediate action to mitigate the situation and reduce the number of people consuming these drinks.
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