kimyun_05
Nov 11, 2023
Writing Feedback / Write a definition paragraph of about 150 words to address the following questions: What is freedom? [2]
Freedom is not the ability to do whatever you want, which is the strength of character to do what is good, true, noble or right. Freedom without discipline is impossible. Humans want to have liberty because of these following reasons. The first reason is self-determination in our life which means we can make decisions to choose things without dependence on guardians. Besides, we have opportunities to have new experiences which a stable life can not respond well to. For example, when we choose an unsustainable life, we have to go to different places where we can not only travel but also work. The following reason is having challenges for ourselves and improving coping with problems. However, the answer of limitations on freedom is difficult. As a result we must have responsibility, rules to maintain our free lifestyle without being bad for society. Moreover, freedom means making choices and maintaining balance between our individual demands between the general public.
Freedom is not the ability to do whatever you want, which is the strength of character to do what is good, true, noble or right. Freedom without discipline is impossible. Humans want to have liberty because of these following reasons. The first reason is self-determination in our life which means we can make decisions to choose things without dependence on guardians. Besides, we have opportunities to have new experiences which a stable life can not respond well to. For example, when we choose an unsustainable life, we have to go to different places where we can not only travel but also work. The following reason is having challenges for ourselves and improving coping with problems. However, the answer of limitations on freedom is difficult. As a result we must have responsibility, rules to maintain our free lifestyle without being bad for society. Moreover, freedom means making choices and maintaining balance between our individual demands between the general public.