Writing Feedback / The only reason for learning a foreign language is to travel to or work in a foreign country [2]

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It was argued that the only motivation for learning a foreign language includes traveling or working in a foreign country. I strongly believe that there are over two reasons for learning a foreign language.

What is undisputed is that the more languages we speak, the more great chances we get in the job market. If we can speak another language that isn't our mother tongue, we can earn a better salary and be promoted to higher positions compared to others who have the same academic background. Some recruiters favor candidates who are bilingual or multilingual over those who are monolingual, which is popular in multinational corporations. Apart from working, traveling is partly why we should learn a foreign language. Namely, we can explore other countries and immerse ourselves in a new culture through speaking to local people or joining local activities without encountering language barriers.

I truly believe that studying a new language begins with more than two factors. It is clear to all that the young generation is serious about studying a foreign language that serves their academics well, such as getting an international degree or gaining knowledge by reading materials in English or another language. The aim of learning a language is to maintain our relationships. If our lovers or friends are foreigners, we might struggle with at least some degree of miscommunication in case we don't speak the language well. Therefore, learning their language is necessary and allows us to have a deep insight into their culture and then effectively build relationships.

In conclusion, I think that various compelling reasons push us to learn a new language, and this depends on our needs and favorites. No doubt, speaking a new language gives us more opportunities in our lives.

Writing Feedback / Write a short story. Imagine you wake up in a completely different city [3]

Imagine you wake up in a completely different city, with no idea how you got there. Write about your experience as you try to find your way back home. What challenges do you face? How do you feel?

I suddenly woke up in a penthouse. Light crept into the room, making me instinctively draw the curtains to see what was happening outside. Incredibly, a vivid and vibrant cityscape unfolded in front of my eyes. Skyscrapers dominated the skyline, their glass facades reflecting the hustle and bustle lifestyle. The streets teemed with people, creating an atmosphere of energy and movement.
A wave of emotions rushed through me-excitement mixed with overwhelming confusion. A thousand questions flooded my mind. How did I get here? Where exactly was I? As always, whenever I encountered challenges, I took a deep breath and thought carefully about my next steps. Looking around the room, I found only my luggage and my phone-no sign of anyone else. Immediately, I used my phone to check my location and contacted my sister for advice on the best way to get home. What a relief! She guided me on the best way to return home.
Nevertheless, I was aware that some opportunities never come again, so I decided to explore the city while waiting for the flight home. Without deadlines or rush, I hopped on a bus, taking in the stunning view. Billboards hung on towering glass buildings, yellow taxis and cyclists filled the roads, while street performers and vendors added to the lively atmosphere. Getting off the bus, I wandered into a cozy coffee shop. The warm aroma of freshly brewed coffee enveloped me, instantly soothing my nerves. Sipping my coffee and enjoying a piece of cake gave me a sense of relaxation. Surrounding me were people from diverse cultural backgrounds, making it clear that this was a true metropolitan city.
Although I didn't clearly understand what was happening around me, I found myself enjoying the fast-paced environment and global atmosphere. My initial fear gradually faded, making room for excitement and appreciation.
Luckily, I arrived home safely and reunited with my family. After reflecting on my journey, I realized it had been a wonderful experience. The only regret I had was not being able to interact deeply with the local residents. Nevertheless, this became my motivation to enhance my language skills and pursue my goal of becoming a polyglot one day.