dar81
Nov 18, 2009
Writing Feedback / Toefl essay on Silvio Berlusconi. [4]
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Imagine that you can talk for one hour with any person who has lived at any time in history. Which person would you choose to meet?
Use specific details and examples to explain your choice.
I do not want to talk with a person who lived in the past.
This is why, out of this essay, I am going to choose one person that is still alive.
His name is Silvio Berlusconi.
He is the prime minister of the Italian republic.
As all of the people in the world know, he is also one of the richer man in the world, he also have al lot of conflicts.
The biggest one is the so called "conflicts of different interests". Berlusconi is also the manager of the most information companies in Italy, and also the manager of banks, football teams and so on.
Personally a think everything except honest and intelligent but he is just a man who become the richest one in Italy due to his relationships with Mafia and his attitude to make business without having any form of respect for other people.
Most of the people in Italy think that he is in politics just to avoid his problems with justice, and I totally agree with this opinion.
If I had the possibility to meet him I just would like to question?
What do you think the history will say about you in 20 years?, for sure you will be considered at the same level of Mussolini, are you not ashamed for this?
Do you understand that since you took the power, Italy is going to be a republic of bananas?
What does your daughter think about your love story with teen girls?
Do you think that a father of Italy can deliver these messages to the nation?
But I know what will be the answer, the answer that only a stupid man can provide.
I hope this is the last time that Italy have to tolerate this.
In Italy there are a mass media dictatorship this is the only truth!
please rank this essay and provide me your advice!!
Thank you very much
Imagine that you can talk for one hour with any person who has lived at any time in history. Which person would you choose to meet?
Use specific details and examples to explain your choice.
I do not want to talk with a person who lived in the past.
This is why, out of this essay, I am going to choose one person that is still alive.
His name is Silvio Berlusconi.
He is the prime minister of the Italian republic.
As all of the people in the world know, he is also one of the richer man in the world, he also have al lot of conflicts.
The biggest one is the so called "conflicts of different interests". Berlusconi is also the manager of the most information companies in Italy, and also the manager of banks, football teams and so on.
Personally a think everything except honest and intelligent but he is just a man who become the richest one in Italy due to his relationships with Mafia and his attitude to make business without having any form of respect for other people.
Most of the people in Italy think that he is in politics just to avoid his problems with justice, and I totally agree with this opinion.
If I had the possibility to meet him I just would like to question?
What do you think the history will say about you in 20 years?, for sure you will be considered at the same level of Mussolini, are you not ashamed for this?
Do you understand that since you took the power, Italy is going to be a republic of bananas?
What does your daughter think about your love story with teen girls?
Do you think that a father of Italy can deliver these messages to the nation?
But I know what will be the answer, the answer that only a stupid man can provide.
I hope this is the last time that Italy have to tolerate this.
In Italy there are a mass media dictatorship this is the only truth!