Undergraduate / 'Academic standards / Indian roots' - University of Rochester short answer [3]

I'm applying also this year.
For the first answer, I think what you have down is way generic.
I really can't speak for the admins, but a lot of essays they receive will be telling them what is good about the school, like oh, diversity, clubs, etc. Don't put that you think college will be helpful to what you will do later in life (going to med school) find specific things about the school that appeals to you and is a "good fit" for you.

and just like the above, talk about "where you chose your own learning path".
good second essay, I thought

best of luck!