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Nov 26, 2009
Undergraduate / Making my sentences more colorful/descriptive [3]

UC Prompt1: Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.

Please help me make this sentence more colorful.

Every morning, I go to school and look around me to see the faces of different ethnicities among my friends. Filipinos, Asians, African Americans, Hispanics, Caucasians, and other ethnicities from around the world roam the halls of my school campus
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