Undergraduate / "Beakers and flask" - Common Application - Extracurricular Short Answer/Essay [2]

In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words or fewer).

Here is my response:

Beakers and flasks encompass the walls around me. Chemicals, both inert and toxic, are encased in glass only a few feet away and wait to be prepared into unknowns for the anxious chemistry students. The water distiller drips into the bottle my friend and co-lab assistant, QingWai, placed below its nozzle. The slight murmur of the classrooms surrounding us filters in through the thin walls, but we slave on measuring and naming unknowns, blocking out all extraneous noise. Pestilent Peter and Noxious Nancy accumulate entrapped inside vials, resting for a while, until an unsuspecting student seizes hold of them. Just as Noxious Nancy and Pestilent Peter, many other unknowns passed through my hands and it was through my passion for chemistry and determination to get any job done, that I succeeded as a chemistry lab assistant.

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