vinniemagg
Dec 3, 2009
Undergraduate / Tennis. Common Application Short Answer:Elaborate on an extracurricular activity [4]
can someone please critique my essay. thank you.
Tennis offers a great opportunity for players to build character. During my time spent playing tennis I have learned the value of honesty and integrity. Tennis is one of the only sports where the players call the game. On the high school level, it is up to the players themselves to call lines and follow the rules. Because tennis allows for your opponent to make calls that directly affect you, there are always times when people get cheated, whether on purpose or through an honest mistake. Through tennis I have learned how to manage and negotiate conflicts in an honest and integral way.
can someone please critique my essay. thank you.
Tennis offers a great opportunity for players to build character. During my time spent playing tennis I have learned the value of honesty and integrity. Tennis is one of the only sports where the players call the game. On the high school level, it is up to the players themselves to call lines and follow the rules. Because tennis allows for your opponent to make calls that directly affect you, there are always times when people get cheated, whether on purpose or through an honest mistake. Through tennis I have learned how to manage and negotiate conflicts in an honest and integral way.