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Dec 23, 2009
Student Talk / What is more important? Common application essays or supplement essays? [9]

Don't worry too much about your word count. 446 is fine. I actually have read the sample essays from my school and 4 out of 5 are around 500 words. They are excellent essays written by students accepted by Harvard. So, calm down.

The admission stuff actually won't spend lots of time to read the long essays.
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Dec 23, 2009
Undergraduate / Common App Short Answer - extracurricular activiry-sustainable [4]

Could you please help me read my answers. What do you think?
Feel free to criticize! I need to narrow my answer because I have 5 words more.
Thank you so much!

Common App Short Answer
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below or on an attached sheet (150 words or fewer).


I participate in founding and flourishing the sustainability group this year for promoting necessary awareness on environmental and energy sources issues in my college and the community. I began my work with a presentation about Peak Oil, which was the greatest aspect to raise the awareness on energy resources. After that, I have engaged on organizing a compost project in my college through the efforts from building hand-made woody composter to publicizing the compost concept to my surrounding. A solar panel project is ongoing to save electricity and I will help with the physics technique part. I have to always actively involved to seek for new point and come up with creative idea to drive our project going further because there was no a regular road to follow. I'm glad to notice the change of attention level toward the environment my schoolmates had, and I gain satisfaction from making the effort and making a difference. (155)

Thanks again!
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