Undergraduate / "Community and Equity as a battey and its charger" - Lehigh supplement [5]

I like the way you approach concepts of community and equity.
You would to better if you give it some life by relating it to your daily activities.

Undergraduate / Grinnell supplement-- how you learned about grinnell [5]

your first paragraph looks quite well.
i like the way u connected the formula with ur dicovery of grinnell name.