Undergraduate / AT THE 217TH PAGE, ANOTHER CHANCE BEGUN.-PENN U SUPPLEMENT ESSAY [13]

rapoch basically covered all the grammar mistakes.

What I thought was weird was, you really think UPenn would accept a "procrastinator?" That's just my opinion. It would have been better if you told the story within an earlier date. Otherwise, the whole thing was written really well, I've got to admit- even for a first draft.