Undergraduate / 'similar ideologies as my own' - Babson supplement- Dear Roommate [8]

There's nowhere you can really go wrong with this prompt, so I just took a look at diction and syntax! Hope my suggestions are helpful!

Thanks for helping me out too!

Undergraduate / Claremont McKenna: , who has helped shape culture and thought [5]

I'm sorry, I would really love to return the favor and help, but I honestly know absolutely nothing about poetry.