Poetry / Poem on 5 senses (dream theme) [11]

hey!!
i have a poem on the 5 senses n its has to be about a "dream"
i realy need help ( i suck at poetry)
here is wat i have written so far

Dream is the smooth success of life like the river flowing without and end.
My voice ,going like a melody, croweds cheer
Raising of audience
Pink,red roese just for me
The smell of money is like a cake baking in the oven
The feeling of success is as warm as the heat form the fire in a winter storm
Walking on the pass of hapinnes is like walking on a rainbow

PLZ HELP !!!!!!! IT DUE ON MONDAY!!1