Book Reports / Solid arguments for Stone Angel Essay [2]

HI there!

I am having trouble coming up with good solid arguments for my Stone Angel Essay. I was wondering if you could help me with this. The theme is "Loss leading to self-awareness" and I want to have the loss of family, the loss of less main characters (I.E. Regina Weese, Clara) and a paragraph on death archetypes and how they relate to Hagar's self awareness. Can you help me?

Here are the instructions for my essay.

The Task

Choose one of the topics listed below and develop a thesis. Your essay should be a well-organized, five-parapgraph essay that uses the text to support ideas. You must also use at least one secondary source to support your ideas.

My Topic

Loss Leading to Self-awareness

Details

* You must use 9-12 quotations, with a minimum of 3 per body paragraph
* The majority of your qoutations should be from your primary source (the novel)
* The essay should be 5-6 pages typed, double-spaced, using size 12 font

Jeff :)

Book Reports / Jane Eyre Essay (how unfairly Jane Eyre, as a woman, is being treated) [5]

I need to write an essay about Jane Eyre and how unfairly Jane Eyre, as a woman, is being treated. This is what I had originally, but my teacher told me it needed work.

Although most men do not realize it is happening, women are not being treated fairly in comparison to men. This has improved in recent years, but is still clearly evident in today's society. Women's decisions have been controlled by people, usually men, because of their misguided sense of empowerment, whether it is brutal treatment, a marriage with inequality or an obstacle in the woman's quest for freedom. Jane Eyre deals with every one of these conflicts through the eyes of the title character. Through her romantic and family relationships, as well as job positions, Jane confronts the many problems that women today face.

Could I have some help editing it?

Thank you so much!