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JGCLOVE   
Mar 16, 2010
Book Reports / thesis statement for "the count of monte cristo" theme essay [5]

this is what i have, is this a good thesis statement?
(my theme is revenge)

Justification in revenge is only enjoyed by the revenged themselves, whether the revenge was taken to its wanted maxima or over the limit, so this would mean, how far would Edmond Dantès go with his revenge?
JGCLOVE   
Mar 17, 2010
Book Reports / thesis statement for "the count of monte cristo" theme essay [5]

Now that I think about it, I think "satisfaction" would be a better fit than "justifaction"
& I don't think Dantes went too far with his revenge, even though he has a thought that he did take it to far when a innocent child was murdered.

Do you think this is better/more simple?:

The satisfaction in revenge is only enjoyed by Dantès himself, whether the revenge was taken to its wanted maxima or it went too far.
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