Martini
Mar 23, 2010
Student Talk / Word count limits and restrictions in essays [44]
Of course! Try it on Twitter. It shows you the count as you type.
Of course! Try it on Twitter. It shows you the count as you type.
Martini
Mar 23, 2010
Grammar, Usage / "what do we have to know about paraphrasing?" - HOW TO START AN INTRODUCTION [6]
You said you can't even write the introduction. Well, my tutor said write the introduction LAST. The intro should explain your argument i.e. your point of view for the essay. When you start the essay you haven't done all your research yet. It's not until you finish the essay that you know what your main point is!
I know it sounds back to front, but truly - try it.
Write the intro last!
You said you can't even write the introduction. Well, my tutor said write the introduction LAST. The intro should explain your argument i.e. your point of view for the essay. When you start the essay you haven't done all your research yet. It's not until you finish the essay that you know what your main point is!
I know it sounds back to front, but truly - try it.
Write the intro last!
Martini
Mar 31, 2010
Writing Feedback / Edit essay - better life today vs. in nineteenth century - feedback [3]
What subject is this essay for? Is this meant to be an academic essay? In which case you need to provide sources, not talk about personal experiences, e.g. your mother's broken leg.
Do you really agree with the title? Really, consider it. Is life better today? We know that we have better technology, but are people happier? Dissect how we can work out how people felt. History, it is often said, is written by the winners. History gets re-written over time. Some people have argued that it is hard to tell the difference between history, journalism and fiction at times.
You write well, but I think you need to base your work on books and other references rather than using personal opinion if this is a university or college essay.
What subject is this essay for? Is this meant to be an academic essay? In which case you need to provide sources, not talk about personal experiences, e.g. your mother's broken leg.
Do you really agree with the title? Really, consider it. Is life better today? We know that we have better technology, but are people happier? Dissect how we can work out how people felt. History, it is often said, is written by the winners. History gets re-written over time. Some people have argued that it is hard to tell the difference between history, journalism and fiction at times.
You write well, but I think you need to base your work on books and other references rather than using personal opinion if this is a university or college essay.
Martini
Apr 13, 2010
Essays / Need topic to practice, writing an essay for the first time [4]
xtjosh - If you're looking for a subject to write about, how about "Describe the key parts of the essay writing process"? Then you'll learn two things at once! Here's a quick guide on a blog I found: Hope that's helpful.
xtjosh - If you're looking for a subject to write about, how about "Describe the key parts of the essay writing process"? Then you'll learn two things at once! Here's a quick guide on a blog I found: Hope that's helpful.