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Mar 29, 2010
Undergraduate / "Visiting new countries" - introduction for admission essay [3]

hi, this is just the begining of my personal essay, just wanted to know what you think, and if you check my grammar and spelling.. thank you in advance

My family and I go to travel very often. Discovering a new country is always a very exciting experience, you get to learn about different cultures, different ways of living ; you get to interact with new people. Visiting new countries is very entertaining. I have been bridging cultures throughout my life. This experience has taught me to look for differences to compromise and similarities to synthesize in order to balance different cultures.

Travelling can seem easy but it needs concise organization and one of the most important things in a trip is the hotel you stay in. After spending journeys visiting new places, you want to get back to a nice and relaxing place.

Getting used to this kind of experience made me quite aware of this whole process and this is how I got incredibly interested in the hospitality management.
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