Undergraduate / "my first swimming lesson" - answer about extracurricular activity [6]

hi, I had to elaborate about an extracurricular activity in 150 words max
this is my answer in 149 words exactly about swimming

The moment I met the water for my first swimming lesson, I developed a real passion for this sport.
My coach, really enthusiastic about the way I felt for this sport, helped me use my potential to grow in high levels.
My competitive personality was brought out, as I won many trophies.
Moreover, this sport showed me that hard work, motivation and persistence pay off. It also taught me that failure is not always negative and can be a gateway to success.

Although, I don't compete anymore, I still practice this sport on regular basis, as a hobby.
Swimming is a great aerobic exercise, useful to forget everyday's pressures.
Being part of a club gave me the opportunity to share my passion and teach me the value of teamwork.
This is why I want to continue practicing throughout my college experience, and maybe getting back on the competition field.