Book Reports / "the biggest problems blue-collar Americans face" - Thesis statement [5]

I will analyze one of the biggest problems blue-collar Americans face; having to work multiple minimum wage jobs for low wages. I will go into greater detail and focus on the underlying root of the problem, the numerous effects the problem has on the person and the people around him/her and conclude by finding a solution

Above is my thesis for the book Nickel and DImed by Ehrenreich and I have to analyze impact working multiple min.wage jobs has on a family and focus on cause/effects, and offer solutions and my perspective on the issue

Is my thesis good? PleasE comment thanks